Good playing but...
...I really wasn't feeling it. The notes just sounded really plain and spearated; you definitely need a damper pedal or something to make it flow together. And I personally thought it could use a little more expression than there was. It was like a robot was playing it--all the notes and articualtion were dead on, but the was barely any feeling to it. Good job, and I respect ya cus I play piano myself. :) Just work on smoothing things out for the next one.